At school we wrote senses poems about the storm in Auckland. Here is mine.
I felt cold and frozen like a Popsicle.
I see a flickering light as my torch shines on the room.
I taste my warm and delicious dinner in my bed.
I hear the rustling leaves banging against my house.
I smell the aroma of my sister's candle as she lights it.
I felt excited and scared like a little boy.
I felt cold and frozen like a Popsicle.
I see a flickering light as my torch shines on the room.
I taste my warm and delicious dinner in my bed.
I hear the rustling leaves banging against my house.
I smell the aroma of my sister's candle as she lights it.
I felt excited and scared like a little boy.
You have some fantastic vocabulary words in here Otis! It gives the poem lots of character.
ReplyDeleteHi Otis. I liked your poem it was intresting.
ReplyDelete