I am a Year 6 at Good Shepherd School in Auckland. I am in Room 6 and my Teacher is Miss Down.
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Wednesday, 27 February 2019
Sunday, 2 December 2018
persuasive
This week in school we did persuasive writing. Here is mine:
Why The New Star Wars Movies Are Trash!
Why The New Star Wars Movies Are Trash!
So Star Wars, you probably know about it. It is definitely the best sci-fi movie series ever. But here's my argument why the newer movies are trash.
Firstly Snoke the all-powerful and mysterious leader of the First Order. We know almost nothing about him he is the most mysterious character ever like, who is he? is he old? is he human? So do you think Snoke should be more mysterious or have more origin?
Secondly, the plot has holes like where did the first order get all there funding to make there ships and weapons like Star-killer base and why did the New Republic demilitarize.
Lastly, every character is a copy of another character Rey= Luke, because Rey lives on a desert planet find a droid and saves the day. Poe = Leia, because Poe sends a droid with information to a desert planet and gets captured by the Sith. Finn=Han because he rescues Poe/Leia from the sith leaves the good guys comes back at the last second and helps save the day.
So in conclusion now you must hate the new Star Wars movies.
So you must like my work now.
Friday, 31 August 2018
Seal
In class we did explanation writing I did mine on seals.
Seals
What are some of the fiercest and the cutest mammals alive? The carnivorous Seal!So did know this whatever the case read on.
Seal parents go out and hunt fish and other sea creature. The biggest Seal is the southern elephant Seal. It can grow to 6.09 metres and the smallest is the ringed Seal which is only 1.5 metres long. They are carnivores and eat small fish such as rock fish herring and salmon. They are the biggest carnivores alive.Seals live in the antarctic Seals have quite a lot of blubber to keep them nice and toasty.Seals have white or black fur. When Seals are born they are fed fattening milk to gain all their blubber. When they are 3-7 years old they mate. Then the females give birth after 9-12 months.
Seals are flourishing and are not endangered at all. :)
Seals are amazing creatures don't you think.
Thursday, 9 August 2018
Speeches
At school, we did speeches we do speeches because it teaches us public speaking. Mine was about A.I (artificial intelligence) stealing our jobs. I hope you enjoy reading it.
You might think that robots and technology are cool and amazing. Robots are doing amazing things like dismantling bombs in countries and being used in complex operations. Technology lets us play games like Fortnite and Minecraft together - letting us pretend to be somewhere and play together- even when we aren’t in the same house, city or country. It lets us connect with people all over the world. But would you still think it was amazing if robots or technology took over people’s jobs, took over your parent’s jobs?
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People are saying that new technologies and artificial intelligence or AI as they call it for short will take over simple processing jobs. Jobs like repetitive factory work and order taking jobs like cashiers at restaurants. You can already go to MacDonalds and order using a machine and visa paywave – no need to talk to a person.
But they will not only take over simple processing jobs as the technology gets more complicated the machines will also take over more complicated process jobs like legal work, accounting and medicine
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People are starting to worry that A.I. will do their jobs better than they can, so they are scared that they will lose their jobs.
But this is not the first time that people have had this worry. Imagine back in the days when people travelled by horse and cart - there were jobs for cart drivers, cart builders, and horse shoemakers, etc. Then suddenly along came this new technology that we all know today as the car….. People were worried about their jobs back then too. What would those cart drivers and builders do now?
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They learned new skills and got new jobs. Because with new technology – new jobs are created. Towns no longer needed a cart builder but they needed a mechanic, and rich people wanted car drivers. As old jobs went through the introduction of new technology, new jobs arose.
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So what does this all mean for people working today? What are the long term effects of this new technology? Will the new technology mean less jobs and because of this less money, which will lead to more of us living on the streets?
I think it will be good and bad. For those that want to learn new skills, they will be fine and be working in jobs they may even prefer in the future. For others it will not be so easy and I think they will find it hard to get work because they don’t have the right skills for the new jobs.
But what do you think?
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Tuesday, 24 July 2018
1st Day
When I got to Hawaii I found it much hotter then I thought. So when we went to the shop I bought a six pack of Dr Peppers. When we got to the place that we were staying I got a pack of Doritos and a Dr Pepper and sat by the pool until dinner. Then I went to sleep.
Monday, 23 July 2018
The airport
On Friday I went to Hawaii. our flight was at midnight when we got there my cousin aunt and grandmother. when we went into the line to check in line we thought it would 1 hour but then a nice employee lets us go to the front the line. After we checked in we went to a cafe and had a midnight snack. Then when we went through security my cousin broke his neck pillow and started crying about it then we got to our gate.
So thats it the airport.
So thats it the airport.
Friday, 6 July 2018
Ala Moana
In Honolulu there is one of the biggest malls in America. It is called Ala Moana and it would take 48 hours to shop in every shop. When I went there I got Lego, cards and candy. when my sister went into the shop she likes she bought and bought and bought. In that shop it smelt like rose farts.
So thats Ala Moana.
So thats Ala Moana.
Home
On the way back from our hotel in Hawaii it took half an hour to get to the airport. When we got to the terminal I was playing Minecraft hunger games. Then we found the food court and had amazing pizza.
When we got on the plane I had some more pizza. On the plane I watched Black Panther and A Wrinkle in Time and the Incredibles. When we got off the plane my Dad picked me up and took us home.
When we got on the plane I had some more pizza. On the plane I watched Black Panther and A Wrinkle in Time and the Incredibles. When we got off the plane my Dad picked me up and took us home.
Tuesday, 10 April 2018
Senses Poem
At school we wrote senses poems about the storm in Auckland. Here is mine.
I felt cold and frozen like a Popsicle.
I see a flickering light as my torch shines on the room.
I taste my warm and delicious dinner in my bed.
I hear the rustling leaves banging against my house.
I smell the aroma of my sister's candle as she lights it.
I felt excited and scared like a little boy.
I felt cold and frozen like a Popsicle.
I see a flickering light as my torch shines on the room.
I taste my warm and delicious dinner in my bed.
I hear the rustling leaves banging against my house.
I smell the aroma of my sister's candle as she lights it.
I felt excited and scared like a little boy.
Friday, 23 March 2018
Memoir Poem
We wrote memoir poems based on a James K Baxter poem. Here is mine.
They had moss, cracks, sand and the occasional lizard or crab. But there was one thing no one knew about. The cave in the middle of the rocks.
I hang out there reading eating playing and hiding. Doing nothing important.
SECRET CAVE
The rocks were usual enough.They had moss, cracks, sand and the occasional lizard or crab. But there was one thing no one knew about. The cave in the middle of the rocks.
I hang out there reading eating playing and hiding. Doing nothing important.
Tuesday, 20 February 2018
Immortal Y wing
So I was playing star wars battlefront II. The aim for the attackers is to beat the defenders in 3 stages but the defenders only have to win one stage to win the game.
I was playing star wars battlefront on the map theed and I was a clone. My team was pushing up then Boom! an enemy tank started to attack us. I was on really low health then right in front of me a Y wing came out of nowhere and bounced on the ground. Normally it should have been destroyed but it just bounced back into the sky. So I was like - what just happened? and then I died.
I was playing star wars battlefront on the map theed and I was a clone. My team was pushing up then Boom! an enemy tank started to attack us. I was on really low health then right in front of me a Y wing came out of nowhere and bounced on the ground. Normally it should have been destroyed but it just bounced back into the sky. So I was like - what just happened? and then I died.
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