persuasive

This week in school we did persuasive writing. Here is mine:

 Why The New Star Wars Movies Are Trash!

So Star Wars, you probably know about it. It is definitely the best sci-fi movie series ever. But here's my argument why the newer movies are trash.

Firstly Snoke the all-powerful and mysterious leader of the First Order. We know almost nothing about him he is the most mysterious character ever like, who is he? is he old? is he human? So do you think Snoke should be more mysterious or have more origin?

Secondly, the plot has holes like where did the first order get all there funding to make there ships and weapons like Star-killer base and why did the New Republic demilitarize.

 Lastly, every character is a copy of another character Rey= Luke, because Rey lives on a desert planet find a droid and saves the day. Poe = Leia, because Poe sends a droid with information to a desert planet and gets captured by the Sith. Finn=Han because he rescues Poe/Leia from the sith leaves the good guys comes back at the last second and helps save the day.

So in conclusion now you must hate the new Star Wars movies.

So you must like my work now.